HaHa
Wow, started out a bit slow, but this was hillarious. I really enjoyed watching it, and WOW your first submission? hahah. Funny stuff bro. You might wanna make all ur symbols in flash tho, considering the fact that your character, aside from navi, were all pixel. Over all I loved it!
3.5/5
~Eiomaru-Kun
Thanks xD Yeah i know the characters pixeled... in second part that will be going to change! I promise...
yep was my first submition it took me like a week
Oh! and I'm a girl n__n
Not Complete
Well it seemed to intruige me... up until it ended. You need to have more shown or discovered in your shorts! Thats what'll make them interesting. I hope that you continue this series with more COMPLETE episodes, lol!
I give it a 2/5
~Eiomaru-Kun!
well, with a response like that i'm going to make another one ^^ it will definately be longer! thanks for the review ^^
Wel...
Honestly, you need much better structure and direction with your animation!
~Eiomaru-Kun
Yeah i know that, but im no pro. But thanks for the review!
I find ways to bring worlds to life. Too many visions in my head beg for time without enough hours in the day. Avid storyteller. High-concept. Action. Adventure. Science Fiction. Fantasy. icon by @poptaffy
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