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Well...

Its a shame this series disappeared.... Great work!!

8.5/10

~Chase

Pretty Cool stuff!

I do tests like this animation often! Though mine aren't quite as polished as this one believe it or not! You have a great sense of cinematic feel! You're coolor choices are interesting however i'd suggest if you're using black as a tone, make the shadows much more define and clear. A lot of the detail in your characters was washed out by this. Another way to help this is by adding a 3rd tone, or a highlight white or even lighter tone of the character's color (be it blue, red, or gray)! Overall I enjoyed it, sorta had the feel of the opening of watchmen with that song playing and all! Hahah also reminded me of Late Night Shopper i think its called? Dunno. Anywho nice work!

~Chase

Sweet

Hahhaha, very cute! Though not quite finished, you definitely put a lot of hard work into this animation! I thought it was extremely thoughtful and heart felt! It made me smile a lot (made me think of my own girlfriend).... You got some pretty decent skills! Keep working and I'm glad to see you did mostly FBF! Great job! And the boner boy part I'm guessing is an inside joke, so its disturbingly and disgustingly cute hahahhahaahh!

~Chase

PS - Remake this with bettter graphics and color (and recording cuz I'm guessing thats you singing/playing ) if you are still with the same girl in a year!

Hrmph....

Hmmm while others might see this at lazy, i see it as artsy! Your concept is very creative. Although, true, the animation was just lazy, your concept was very good. I thought that if it had been longer, and you had put more effort into your graphics, it would have been something to awe at! Try expanding more, improve on the graphics and add more scenarios and resubmit! I'd love to see more!

~Chase

Loved the last bit of text!

Lol pretty fun! A few pointers as far as tweening goes! When you have say a hand move to grab another ledge, perhaps adding a frame between the too in which the hand first swings out before touching the ledge would help make the movement more believable. Also, give some stationary animation to the guys up top, maybe some fidgeting, or kicking dirt, it would definitely liven up the scene a little more.
Try working a little harder too on you cliff side, give it some nice texturing or shading so we have a general feel for the environment. Also, don't be afraid to add stars to the sky! Or a little more detail in the body parts/eyes! :D Hope this helps!

~Chase

Fun!

Hahaha funny stuff! Great way to introduce your film. Now I'm curious as to what the real story was about, or if those people in the beginning were actually yourselves, or the characters you play! haha Well either way, funny! As far as animation goes, simple, but I think that was the point! It was very fun to watch so animation is 4/10, audio 5/10, writing however was fun! 8.5/10 Overall i give it a 7/10!

~Chase

Funny, Cute, Sassy!

Hahah I love this flash! The series looks awesome! I love the homages to DBZ and how much fun it looks like you had animating this! Great job!

Well done!

Wow! Great story and twist! The voice acting was a bit weak, but well done. The piece was drawn well... but animated poorly. Try adding more inbetweens. 20fps is an awesome frame rate, use it! Don't be afraid haha. Well great job and good luck w/ the festival! Hope to see more stuff from you!

~Eiomaru-kun

A Breath of Fresh Air into NG

I am so glad to see that quality is coming back to the serious shorts here at NG. This flash was an amazing start to your series. I look forward to the next installments, any idea how many there will be?

So my review:
The visual were awesome! You did a great job at balancing the animation techniques of FBF and tweening. I loved your color schemes as well. You definitely had a vision that you brought to life. How long did you work on this entry?

The story really intruiged me! I like the conflict that the hero has by trying to beat the man in his similar case, are they able to kill eachother? That could be a really interesting quarell.

I love your style and I look forward to the next installment!

~Eiomaru

Simple yet funny!

I really enjoyed this very simple cartoon. However, I found myself getting a bit confused between the cats. Perhaps give each cat there own thing, maybe add a hat to one fo them. Also use different voices. They all had very simple, monotoned nasal voices you know? The animation was very static, which worked with the humor. Over all good job! I look forward to your work in the future my friend!

~Eiomaru-kun

Cryomancer responds:

Thanks man.

The cats are different colours and wear different clothes. They also have different shaped heads and eyes. So they all have their own look.

Glad you enjoyed it though man!

I find ways to bring worlds to life. Too many visions in my head beg for time without enough hours in the day. Avid storyteller. High-concept. Action. Adventure. Science Fiction. Fantasy. icon by @poptaffy

Chase Langley @InputUnknown

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